This challenge came to me from Sandra Bunino
(via her friend Claire Gillian). Here’s the challenge (which I will extend to some fellow authors below):Paula Tiberius
Mimi the Writer
Sue LyndonKT Grant
Find the LOOKs in your current WIPs AND post the paragraphs around the word. Choose your favorite THREE in your WIP to post.Mine are from a historical erotic romance. Basics: Sir Edwin is scum (don't worry, he gets it in the end). Katherine is good. Serafina is morally ambiguous.
“What a sight you are, my dear. Perhaps I shall help Serafina in her work. Yes, I think I might. It will be a nice warm-up before we begin educating your little sister.” Katherine’s cry of outrage was muffled. Sir Edwin laughed, putting a gloved finger to her lips. “Shhhh. I haven’t touched her. Yet. I think we’ll start with you so that you will have an idea what your sister can look
forward to.” Edwin smiled evilly. “Serafina, your crop if you please.”
Katherine’s eyes widened slightly. She would not betray herself but she knew in her heart no good could come of this. She hoped the wine was drugged although she felt no ill-effects yet from the wine Serafina had brought her earlier. The two women sat on the bed, Katherine now clad in a virginal gossamer nightgown supplied by Serafina. Sir Edwin sat unashamedly naked on the bed between the two. Katherine was afraid to look down and see, yes, there it was. Sir Edwin was beginning to show signs of renewed interest. Please let the wine be drugged Katherine prayed, drinking deeply. Sir Edwin let a finger trace idly on Serafina’s leather-crossed thigh then turned to kiss the woman deeply, rubbing her exposed nipples pushed up by her black leather corset before his hand wandered to Katherine’s side of the bed to reach for her breast. “Ladies, I believe I have an idea. Katherine surely must be sore and be in need of a woman’s touch, Serafina. Perhaps you can help her out.”
Serafina trailed soft kisses up the inside of Katherine’s thigh and paused as she reached her captive’s marble-smooth Venus mont. A quick kiss was pressed there, then another. A third kiss was joined by a quick flick of tongue, then a deeper kiss and soon Serafina was stroking the younger woman’s womanhood. It was wet with desire, whether from the drugged wine or real passion Serafina did not know. A quick look to see Katherine’s flushed cheeks and closed eyes told her all she needed to know. Serafina returned to Katherine, this time savouring her sweetness.