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This challenge came to me from Sandra Bunino (via her friend Claire Gillian). Here’s the challenge (which I will extend to some fellow authors below):

Paula Tiberius

Mimi the Writer

Sue Lyndon

KT Grant

Celeste Jones
 
Find the LOOKs in your current WIPs AND post the paragraphs around the word. Choose your favorite THREE in your WIP to post.

Mine are from a historical erotic romance. Basics: Sir Edwin is scum (don't worry, he gets it in the end). Katherine is good. Serafina is morally ambiguous.


“What a sight you are, my dear. Perhaps I shall help Serafina in her work. Yes, I think I might. It will be a nice warm-up before we begin educating your little sister.” Katherine’s cry of outrage was muffled. Sir Edwin laughed, putting a gloved finger to her lips. “Shhhh. I haven’t touched her. Yet. I think we’ll start with you so that you will have an idea what your sister can look forward to.” Edwin smiled evilly. “Serafina, your crop if you please.”


Katherine’s eyes widened slightly. She would not betray herself but she knew in her heart no good could come of this. She hoped the wine was drugged although she felt no ill-effects yet from the wine Serafina had brought her earlier. The two women sat on the bed, Katherine now clad in a virginal gossamer nightgown supplied by Serafina. Sir Edwin sat unashamedly naked on the bed between the two. Katherine was afraid to look down and see, yes, there it was. Sir Edwin was beginning to show signs of renewed interest. Please let the wine be drugged Katherine prayed, drinking deeply. Sir Edwin let a finger trace idly on Serafina’s leather-crossed thigh then turned to kiss the woman deeply, rubbing her exposed nipples pushed up by her black leather corset before his hand wandered to Katherine’s side of the bed to reach for her breast. “Ladies, I believe I have an idea. Katherine surely must be sore and be in need of a woman’s touch, Serafina. Perhaps you can help her out.”

Serafina trailed soft kisses up the inside of Katherine’s thigh and paused as she reached her captive’s marble-smooth Venus mont. A quick kiss was pressed there, then another. A third kiss was joined by a quick flick of tongue, then a deeper kiss and soon Serafina was stroking the younger woman’s womanhood. It was wet with desire, whether from the drugged wine or real passion Serafina did not know. A quick look to see Katherine’s flushed cheeks and closed eyes told her all she needed to know. Serafina returned to Katherine, this time savouring her sweetness.

 


Comments

09/28/2012 17:31

Yum - I love this! Hurry and finish, pleeezzzee!

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Sophie
09/30/2012 14:43

I'll send you the tidbit when it's finished (just after I eat this pie).
Sophie.

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09/29/2012 11:08

I accept your challenge! May I challenge others as well?

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Sophie
09/29/2012 11:13

Please do! This reminds me I meant to email you first! Doi. I'm a bit backwards this week. Menopausal moments.

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09/29/2012 13:27

Happy Birthday!!!

whew those excerpts were super hot!

Okay, Celeste challenged me, so I'm taking it on...

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Sophie
09/30/2012 14:43

Thanks Renee. I rarely get to write anymore. :(

Going to check yours out.
Sophie.

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09/29/2012 23:57

Celeste sent me here! This is a fun challenge. Why does Katherine wish she were drugged?

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Sophie
09/30/2012 14:42

I haven't decided yet. I had an idea then pitched it. If I figure it out I'll scoot you the answer! I'll have to go have a peek at yours.

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